A Poem For Storming

[.avaline]

As the Tears Roll Down my Face
By: Storming~`*`~Shard

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As the tears roll down my face...
My relfective eyes watch in despair
Those I loved are gone...What is left for me?
Nothing...
My grace is gone
The homes I have known are dead to me...

As the tears roll down my face...
My storming soul stands alone clinging...
Clinging to the fragment, which I call life

As the tears roll down my face...
I stand watching life whirl by, and its still shadow
My storming soul cries
"What left have I ?"
As the tears roll down my face...

Can you call this life?
I can't know, for I have known only this life...
Only this h---...
I'm its forsaken wretch

_{((Sorry if the swear-word offends anybody...I just though it fit right there perfectly.))}

[Mace]

Pretty good, but depressing....why does it seem all the poems that teens write are depressing? Gj!

[.avaline]

Weell I wrote it at 10:30 *yawns* and I wanted one for her, my fav. depressed charrie ever.

[Cujo]

Awesome! You're good at writing poetry! (unlike me, and my stinkin' poem got picked to be in this contest...I am NOT happy...>_<)

[.avaline]

Thanks